Fic: Lessons, TezuRyo, 150 words
May. 10th, 2006 01:33 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
aliasI've been trying to write Tezuryo, and struggling with characterization, especially the way anime and manga Tezuka are actually not quite the same person, and with the differences in the Tezuka-Ryoma relationship. Anyway, I got out this drabble and a half today. Still not sure if this fits, but it's a start.
Lessons
The second time Tezuka goes to Kyuushuu to recover from an injury, he finally learns the lesson he’d tried to teach Momoshiro three years before. He learns to stop letting his shoulder take the strain of worrying about his elbow; his knee the strain of worrying about his ankle. He learns to stop thinking about parts of himself as weaker than others, and needing to be protected; he learns that he is stronger when all of him takes the burden, and so is his team.
He gets better, and he goes home. His first day back, at morning practice, he asks Echizen to play a match with him. On Saturday, at the clay courts where they played their first match, he kisses Echizen over the net after the first game (1-0, Echizen). They don’t finish their match. It doesn’t matter. They know there will be other days, and other matches.
Lessons
The second time Tezuka goes to Kyuushuu to recover from an injury, he finally learns the lesson he’d tried to teach Momoshiro three years before. He learns to stop letting his shoulder take the strain of worrying about his elbow; his knee the strain of worrying about his ankle. He learns to stop thinking about parts of himself as weaker than others, and needing to be protected; he learns that he is stronger when all of him takes the burden, and so is his team.
He gets better, and he goes home. His first day back, at morning practice, he asks Echizen to play a match with him. On Saturday, at the clay courts where they played their first match, he kisses Echizen over the net after the first game (1-0, Echizen). They don’t finish their match. It doesn’t matter. They know there will be other days, and other matches.
![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2006-05-10 01:56 pm (UTC)(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-10 03:29 pm (UTC)(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-10 05:17 pm (UTC)Never let uncertainty stop you from posting ficcage, if people find it out of character they tend to say, but at the same time fanfiction is a matter of interpretation and you should be writing because you enjoy it that way. If other people enjoy it too then that's just a bonus and good for them. Tezuka to me in the series is always very decisive, so while I can understand when he's written as morally conflicted because he's very proper, I can equally see him being a lot more dominant, which I suspect some of my fics will end up reflecting.
What is Tez like in the manga out of interest? I'm a series girl.
(no subject)
From:(no subject)
From:(no subject)
From:(no subject)
From:(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-10 05:22 pm (UTC)♥
(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-10 08:59 pm (UTC)(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-10 11:27 pm (UTC)(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-11 01:51 am (UTC)(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-05-11 07:15 am (UTC)XD
(no subject)
From:no subject
Date: 2006-12-27 06:00 pm (UTC)i thought he learned that lesson a long time ago.